Monorhyme On Vallabh Savani Sir

Vallabh Savani is so kind and cute
Above all, ready to help any boot – 
Low caste, low esteemed or kaput.
Love through his blood does overshoot
And sooths many Sankets who commute
Benevolence to all generations coot.
In dilemma and hassle, he is parachute;
Help for a friend; foe and faulty to execute.
Has contributed to campaign anti-pollute,
Sighted orphans and settled destitute,
Awarded teachers like me and persecute
Vast enmity against him which substitute
Allies as Hardik and myself in healthy lawsuit.
Never saw him angry or upset as he commute;
Insane behaviour is far as never did he salute
Someone, but bowed his head to transmute 
Inner love and care to all old and his recruit.
Remain healthy and wealthy! This my tribute.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/30/2017 11:06:00 AM
Indeed a tribute! However re. my comment on bending rules, which you have. These 3 lines: 'In dilemma and hassle, he is parachute; Help for a friend; foe and faulty to execute. Has contributed to campaign anti-pollute' break the acrostic sequence albeit the h of hassle does bring that sentence into line. As for the other 2, there no, no's. Can't fault the monorhyming. With respect.
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback. I changed the title. Once again Thanks for your inspiring, kind, soft fingers. Your view is encouragement for me & Pari Style.
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