Larry Bradfield Poet Monorhyme

Monorhyme - Oh So Beautiful

I asked her softly if she would stay the night
She answered that it was wrong but it felt right
She's oh so beautiful in the morning light

10-29-18
For Broken Wings' contest Three Lines

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Jan Allison November 5, 2018 at 5:47 AM Aww how romantic! Many congratulations on your win Larry, :-) Hugs Jan xx Larry Bradfield November 13, 2018 at 7:37 AM Thank you, Jan

Constance La France November 3, 2018 at 12:31 PM Larry , congratulations on your win in my contest ~ Larry Bradfield November 13, 2018 at 7:38 AM Thank you...interesting challenge!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 3, 2018 at 12:19 PM Wonderful lines! Congratulations on your win :) xomo Larry Bradfield November 13, 2018 at 7:38 AM Thanks, Maureen

Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2018 at 2:22 AM - Oh ... romantic, Larry :) - Congratulations on a great win - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Larry Bradfield November 13, 2018 at 7:38 AM Thank you SS

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2018 at 8:15 PM Sweet and melodious. Congrats on your awesome win Larry Bradfield November 13, 2018 at 7:39 AM Thanks, Andrea