Lin Lane Poet Haiku

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Monoliths In the Field

{ Mystic Split Haiku }

 dew-tipped sunflowers
entice the pollen seekers
            with
     faces to the sun
              ~

    cinnamon cyclops
amid bright golden faces
             hail
  Ra, as their namesake
              ~ 

   blossomed monoliths
stand vigilant in the fields
            sway
   in tune with the wind
              ~

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White Sage April 12, 2016 at 11:07 AM Such beautiful write Lin, sunflowers are beautiful too, combining both, that's awesome!

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2016 at 9:07 PM these are simply divine!!

Constance La France April 6, 2016 at 4:31 PM Lin, these haikus were truly beautiful, I am loving them 7 ~ Lin Lane April 6, 2016 at 5:17 PM Thanks Constance. I'll be back home next week. ;)

Kelly Deschler April 5, 2016 at 11:54 PM Sunflowers are lovely and your poem is just as amazing!... Very vivid and creative descriptions. Nice work, Lin :) Lin Lane April 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM Thanks so much, Kelly.

Jack Horne April 4, 2016 at 11:51 AM beautiful haiku poems Lin Lane April 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM Thank you, Jack.

Daniel Turner March 29, 2016 at 8:51 AM Sun flowers are my son's favorite. Excellent haikus, Peaches. Peace my dear friend:) Lin Lane March 29, 2016 at 8:53 AM Thank you most appreciatively, Danny. I sent soup mail yesterday.

Keith Bickerstaffe March 28, 2016 at 3:40 PM Gorgeous phrasing and imagery... all three equally beautiful! Well done Lin!! Keith Lin Lane March 28, 2016 at 4:31 PM Thank you very much, Keith.