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Monoliths In the Field

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{ Mystic Split Haiku } dew-tipped sunflowers entice the pollen seekers with faces to the sun ~ cinnamon cyclops amid bright golden faces hail Ra, as their namesake ~ blossomed monoliths stand vigilant in the fields sway in tune with the wind ~

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White Sage

Date: 4/12/2016 11:07:00 AM

Such beautiful write Lin, sunflowers are beautiful too, combining both, that's awesome!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 9:07:00 PM

these are simply divine!!

Constance La France

Date: 4/6/2016 4:31:00 PM

Lin, these haikus were truly beautiful, I am loving them 7 ~

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Constance. I'll be back home next week. ;)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2016 11:54:00 PM

Sunflowers are lovely and your poem is just as amazing!... Very vivid and creative descriptions. Nice work, Lin :)

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kelly.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2016 11:51:00 AM

beautiful haiku poems

Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Jack.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/29/2016 8:51:00 AM

Sun flowers are my son's favorite. Excellent haikus, Peaches. Peace my dear friend:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/29/2016 8:53:00 AM

Thank you most appreciatively, Danny. I sent soup mail yesterday.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/28/2016 3:40:00 PM

Gorgeous phrasing and imagery... all three equally beautiful! Well done Lin!! Keith

Lin Lane
Date: 3/28/2016 4:31:00 PM

Thank you very much, Keith.