Monoliths In the Field

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{ Mystic Split Haiku }

 dew-tipped sunflowers
entice the pollen seekers
            with
     faces to the sun
              ~

    cinnamon cyclops
amid bright golden faces
             hail
  Ra, as their namesake
              ~ 

   blossomed monoliths
stand vigilant in the fields
            sway
   in tune with the wind
              ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/12/2016 11:07:00 AM
Such beautiful write Lin, sunflowers are beautiful too, combining both, that's awesome!
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:07:00 PM
these are simply divine!!
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Date: 4/6/2016 4:31:00 PM
Lin, these haikus were truly beautiful, I am loving them 7 ~
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Constance. I'll be back home next week. ;)
Date: 4/5/2016 11:54:00 PM
Sunflowers are lovely and your poem is just as amazing!... Very vivid and creative descriptions. Nice work, Lin :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kelly.
Date: 4/4/2016 11:51:00 AM
beautiful haiku poems
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jack.
Date: 3/29/2016 8:51:00 AM
Sun flowers are my son's favorite. Excellent haikus, Peaches. Peace my dear friend:)
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Date: 3/29/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you most appreciatively, Danny. I sent soup mail yesterday.
Date: 3/28/2016 3:40:00 PM
Gorgeous phrasing and imagery... all three equally beautiful! Well done Lin!! Keith
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Date: 3/28/2016 4:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Keith.
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