Monolith

monolith wrapped with blackish aura now old lion has lost it's strength wiggles under the iron gossamer sometimes yelps yawns and sighs waiting in labyrinth for macabre end For P.D'S contest

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/30/2014 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations to your Elegy BL! :-)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/30/2014 8:24:00 AM

Thanks a lot for wishing me congrats and for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/28/2014 9:21:00 PM

Powerfully descriptive! Waiting in the labyrinth for macabre end, what a great way to close the poem, I enjoyed this and all the meanings it holds. Grats on your win ;)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/29/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thanks a lot for wishing me congrats and for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:00:00 PM

BL, this poem is one of your best. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/28/2014 8:31:00 AM

My lovely friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/27/2014 12:37:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful reply..LINDA

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2014 1:11:00 PM

You are welcome. Loved always, my *friend, bl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:29:00 AM

Short and sweet, with elegiac tone, Congrats, BL

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2014 12:27:00 PM

My lovely friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2014 5:28:00 AM

Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2014 12:27:00 PM

My lovely sweet friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 5:12:00 AM

great imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2014 12:26:00 PM

My lovely friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:42:00 PM

hello My friend, BL, WOW, you actually did one of my contests.. Now that put a smile on my face.. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2014 12:25:00 PM

I love your sweet smile always and keep this treasure on your face always. All of us in the P.S. see your sweet and nice smiling aura in the avatar's image. Thanks a lot for wishing me congratulation on my win. My *friend, loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2014 6:08:00 PM

this is great imagery here. I sure like it!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2014 12:18:00 PM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/9/2014 7:41:00 AM

Hi bl,i see a stone lion here, struggling against the elements, out of sight,,i may be wrong,,but your poetry always has me thinking

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/10/2014 3:04:00 AM

You are always genius and I have already told you that I can't fly out from your catch. Yes, that's. Many thanks for your nice perfect comment. Loved always my lovely friend. May I regard you as one of my best friends in the P.S.?