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Monoku- the Stillness

rocks and blue water...stillness of snow-capped mountains...hidden birds calling ___________________ February 20, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/the stillness Copyright Protected, ID 17-9750-10-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Monoku 1: Your Best (old/new) Sponsor, Silent One First Place
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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Congrats on your win. Lovely line.
Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 4:26 AM
Wonderful , BW ... Congratulations ...
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win! hugs eve
Inman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 12:30 AM
BW, a beautiful write filled with serene peaceful images.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Congratulations, BW on your great win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:11 PM
Back with congratulations dear poetess! <3
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 9:28 PM
oh you got so many wonderful images into yours, Constance. BIG congrats on your well deserved win. Was your Xmas awesome?
S     Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 6:17 PM
Lovely BW!! Congratulations on your top win!!! Best, Judy
Ashley Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings for your wonderful win with this beautiful write.
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 4:01 PM
BEAUTIFUL! Congrats, Constance. Janice
Moorman Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations, Constance. Great write, great win, for a great lady.
Smith Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Lovely write Constance, congratulations...
Callus Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:53 PM
What a lovely and serene one liner this is, Constance! Congratulations on your high-flying win! // paul
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:49 PM
- Lovely written, B.W. - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 1:24 PM
Loved this BW... great imagery.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest
Stars Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:37 AM
shh ... listen ...
Tripp Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Wow. Beautifully descriptive in few words.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Beautiful land and soundscape, settles the soul. My best to you :) xomo!
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