Monoku - Stillness


rocks and blue water   stillness  far   snow-capped mountains-  peace for this sad soul

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February 20, 2016



Poetry/Monoku/stillness
Copyright Protected, ID 16-759-801-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Monoku 7, 
What you see and feel in image,
sponsor, PD

Seventh Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Hi Broken, belated congratulations on this winning Monoku in the contest. I found such peace in the read. A Seven.
La France Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Vlad, thanks so much for the congratulations and the 7, appreciate ~
Gasun Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:55 AM
My Warm Congratulations on your win and this very wonderful monuko my dear friend, BW! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL
La France Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Galeo, thanks for the congratulations and the wonderful and the hugs !!
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:02 PM
you captured all the details of the picture, lovely friend. Congrats.
La France Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment, the lovely and the congrats !!!
Johnson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Hi Broken Wings. Congrats on your win
La France Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Curtis, thanks for visiting with the congrats, appreciate !
Devnath  Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Beautifully done. Congrats on your win my lovely friend,bl
La France Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:05 PM
BL, thanks for the beautiful, the congrats and the lovely !
Selfa Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations BW on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans
La France Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Hans, thanks for the congratulations, the wonderful and the amazing !
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Broken..
La France Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:56 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrats, the awesome and the wonderful ~
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:57 AM
Linda, thanks for the great contest and for my placement, I am honored ...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:51 PM
A 7 and a favourite! Beautifully crafted MONOKU with sublime language and imagery. Well done B.W. Best wishes, Keith
La France Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:58 AM
Keith, oh thanks for the 7 and fav, the beautiful and the compliments, so appreciated ~
White Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 7:32 PM
Beautiful BW.
La France Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Kelli, thanks so much for visiting with the beautiful ~
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