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Monoku - In the Forest


beautiful decay and winding tendrils caress-  song birds twittering 

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January 7, 2016


Poetry/Monoku/in the forest
Copyright Protected, ID 16-742-272-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Monoku #1,
sponsor, Poet Destroyer

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations !
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:28 AM
BROKEN, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Thanks
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:37 PM
thank you for the reply
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Linda, you are welcome, I was thrilled to place in your contest, so grateful for the honor ~~
Inman Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Nature overcomes. Love the feel of this piece, BW. It is the beginning to an eerie tale, somewhat twisted but lighthearted at the same time.
La France Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:26 AM
James thanks for visiting, yes there is an eerie beauty in the decay that inspires ~
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 9:37 PM
woohoo!!! So glad you are on this list. Love this, Constance . I just had to see this list before bedtime!! Congrats to you.
La France Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 3:09 AM
Andrea, thanks for the great comment and the congrats, appreciate !
A   Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Broken, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --
La France Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 3:10 AM
Linda, great contest and thanks for my placement, appreciate that very much ~
Boddie Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:51 PM
so many Beautiful thoughts and you caught em....this sounds like the beginning of autumn....Beautiful decay as the leaves start to change....and as they fall, not one eye can complain....because we all know Beauty in one way or another....and you have it all without any cover....;)
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Eric, thank you for that beautiful comment, appreciate it ~
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:38 PM
great painting, Broken Wing, good luck in the contest. I wrote one, but not sure I did it right.
La France Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting ~
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Perfect write , best of luck in the contest and hugs / / :) dalia
La France Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Dalia, thanks for visiting ~
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:19 PM
one line and you got the image echoing... wow! excellent, you've got the wildness captured
La France Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Sage, thanks for the wow and the excellent, appreciate !
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 3:48 PM
what an interesting image and lovely: beautiful decay!
La France Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting my poem ~
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