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Monoku 3 - Colorful Speech Impediment

marshmallows cling white ash yet tumbling they are all white • cold wanes dwip dwip




Written 1/4/18
Monoku 3 Colors
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Edward Mccall

Date: 1/18/2018 12:47:00 PM

LOL so clever and so cute.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/20/2018 7:21:00 PM

Lol. It was fun dreaming up.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/6/2018 12:30:00 AM

how cute! so you missed the deadline and hit the mark, you aren't the first, cough, cough! All the best ... CayCay

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 11:47:00 AM

Lol, CayCay...its always my procrastination that gets me in trouble. Don't ask about my novel in progress. Lol. Thank you for your continued kindness and encouragement. Your friendship is invaluable.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/5/2018 10:35:00 AM

Call d shwink...d marshmallows cling...Very imaginative...creativity out of hand...Blessing to you Rhoda

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/5/2018 12:49:00 PM

LMBO. I adore your humor, Arturo! Thank you for making me laugh and for your kindness. Blessings doubled, air kissed, and returned ten fold.

Chris Green

Date: 1/4/2018 4:03:00 PM

This was fun to weed. :)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/4/2018 6:18:00 PM

Lol. Too funny! Love it. Thanks for stopping in. :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/4/2018 3:36:00 PM

Nicely done, Rhoda, sorry you missed out on the contest. That's what happens when you procrastinate :) John

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/4/2018 3:44:00 PM

And thank you too, Dearheart.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/4/2018 3:43:00 PM

It most certainly does. Soup mail me later to ask how much of my novel I have written. Lol.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2018 3:13:00 PM

Oh what a pity you missed out on the contest, Rhoda! Undoubtedly this would have made the grade. Silly me...and I always thought that the dwip was a dance! Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 5:09:00 AM

..a gem with many rough edges!!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/4/2018 3:42:00 PM

After I originally wrote it, I added the "dwip" because people weren't understanding the "all white" (all right) and "wane" (rain). So there ya have it, Paul. The inner workings of an out of the box mind. Lol. Thanks so much my friend for your loyal support. I hope you know you're a gem.