Monoku

Mindless mumblings, imprisoned words planning their escape ©5/30/2018 for Silent One Monoku Contest

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Date: 6/15/2018 10:21:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, john. Well done.

Date: 6/2/2018 8:01:00 PM

VERY cool one, Buddy. Congrats for the win.

Date: 6/2/2018 1:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement.

Date: 6/1/2018 12:50:00 PM

I know the mindless part, congratulations John...

Date: 6/1/2018 6:07:00 AM

- Congratulations with your one line, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 6/1/2018 5:13:00 AM

so true, yet they call it poetry.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Date: 5/30/2018 10:26:00 PM

Nice one John...we have a competition my friend...best of luck...love and light...^WW^

John Lawless
Date: 5/31/2018 6:54:00 AM

Thanks WW it is always good to be in the game....

Date: 5/30/2018 10:16:00 PM

This one made me laugh , John. I hope it does well:)

John Lawless
Date: 5/31/2018 6:52:00 AM

Well then Daniel it hit its mark and tickled a poets muse.