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Monoku - Beautiful Dreams

my dreams flow away  like colorful leaves floating  the trees are reaching

the river of life    where dreams linger on the shore    water worn pebbles

yet some still linger  and I hold them to my heart  oh beautiful dreams

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February 15, 2016

Poetry/Monoku/beautiful dreams
Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-084-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, River of Dreams,
sponsor, Poet Destroyer

Sixth Place

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Rhoma Em Date: 2/22/2016 2:05:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/22/2016 6:49:00 PM Rhoma, thanks for visiting for the congratulations !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/21/2016 10:45:00 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Broken.. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/22/2016 3:45:00 AM Upma, thanks for the congrat and the awesome and wonderful, appreciate ~

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/21/2016 10:41:00 PM thank you for the wonderful reply Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/21/2016 9:01:00 PM Congratulations on your win , Broken Wing! Hugs Eve Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/22/2016 3:45:00 AM Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the hugs ~

Susan Gentry Date: 2/21/2016 6:58:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Great poem. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/22/2016 3:53:00 AM Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the great !

Paul Callus Date: 2/21/2016 2:24:00 PM Very beautiful, Constance! Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/21/2016 2:58:00 PM Paul, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations, so grateful ~~

Sandra Haight Date: 2/21/2016 12:42:00 PM Lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/21/2016 2:58:00 PM Sandra, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations and hugs !

Bl Devnath Date: 2/21/2016 11:14:00 AM A great congratulation my lovely friend on your win. Loved much ...."some still.....dreams". Loved always,bl Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/21/2016 2:59:00 PM BL, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the love !

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/21/2016 10:23:00 AM Using the pebbles to represent the dreams, that was so clever, Constance. you wrote an excellent little poem for this contest. Congrats for the win. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/21/2016 3:00:00 PM Andrea, thanks for the compliments and the congrats ~

Sneha Rv Date: 2/21/2016 10:21:00 AM This is marvellous!! Congratulations on your wonderful win, dear BW!! :D :D Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/21/2016 3:01:00 PM Sneha, thanks so much for the marvelous, the congratulations and the wonderful ~

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/21/2016 10:11:00 AM Broken, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/21/2016 3:01:00 PM Linda, thanks for the awesome contest and for my fine placement, I am deeply honored ~

White Sage Date: 2/19/2016 4:46:00 AM that's a nice dream, beautiful indeed...well written BW Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/19/2016 9:13:00 AM Sage, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment ~

James Inman Date: 2/17/2016 11:27:00 AM Very nice, BW. Great repeat of the word dreams. I didn't see this contest. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/17/2016 2:48:00 PM James, thanks for visiting, and the compliment, it probably filled very quickly ~

Steve Grammatico Date: 2/16/2016 10:00:00 AM Vibrant images, Broken Wings. I really like this. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/17/2016 1:52:00 AM Steve, thanks for visiting, and for the vibrant ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 2/15/2016 8:21:00 PM Excellent monoku. My best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/17/2016 1:54:00 AM Nayda, thanks for the excellent, appreciate ~