Home » Poems » Constance La France » Monoku - Beautiful Dreams

Monoku - Beautiful Dreams

my dreams flow away like colorful leaves floating the trees are reaching the river of life where dreams linger on the shore water worn pebbles yet some still linger and I hold them to my heart oh beautiful dreams ____________________ February 15, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/beautiful dreams Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-084-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, River of Dreams, sponsor, Poet Destroyer Sixth Place

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Rhoma Em

Date: 2/22/2016 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 6:49:00 PM

Rhoma, thanks for visiting for the congratulations !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:45:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Broken..

Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 3:45:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the congrat and the awesome and wonderful, appreciate ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:41:00 PM

thank you for the wonderful reply

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , Broken Wing! Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 3:45:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the hugs ~

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Great poem.

Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 3:53:00 AM

Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the great !

Paul Callus

Date: 2/21/2016 2:24:00 PM

Very beautiful, Constance! Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 2:58:00 PM

Paul, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations, so grateful ~~

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/21/2016 12:42:00 PM

Lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 2:58:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations and hugs !

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/21/2016 11:14:00 AM

A great congratulation my lovely friend on your win. Loved much ...."some still.....dreams". Loved always,bl

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 2:59:00 PM

BL, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the love !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:23:00 AM

Using the pebbles to represent the dreams, that was so clever, Constance. you wrote an excellent little poem for this contest. Congrats for the win.

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 3:00:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the compliments and the congrats ~

Sneha Rv

Date: 2/21/2016 10:21:00 AM

This is marvellous!! Congratulations on your wonderful win, dear BW!! :D :D

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 3:01:00 PM

Sneha, thanks so much for the marvelous, the congratulations and the wonderful ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:11:00 AM

Broken, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 3:01:00 PM

Linda, thanks for the awesome contest and for my fine placement, I am deeply honored ~

White Sage

Date: 2/19/2016 4:46:00 AM

that's a nice dream, beautiful indeed...well written BW

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 9:13:00 AM

Sage, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment ~