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a white moth on our carpet - a tissue of orchid petals

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James Foulk

Date: 8/20/2008 11:50:00 AM

it is a wonderful what one can say in so few words, a great write, enjoyed reading this, and i can see that white moth, we had hundreds of them one summer in our house, our dog brandon would go after them and eat them. I wrote a poem about that, called the moth hound. Thank you for reading my He bore my sins and for your very kind comment.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/20/2008 8:08:00 AM

It takes such insight to see beauty in a dead moth........this was perfect!......Carrie

Sean Kelly

Date: 8/20/2008 8:01:00 AM

As only you can ... Brian .. Great observation ... Re the Indian summer , If it arrives it will be appreciated by the Cowboys who run the Country....