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Monoku-In a Moat

three hippos in a bloat - a family outing afloat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/2/2008 9:54:00 PM
I have seen those hippos in a boat and wondered how it could possibly float. thanks for the laugh. Lainie
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Date: 8/2/2008 11:45:00 AM
They sure love the water. A fun write! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/2/2008 5:41:00 AM
Hahaha...nice imagry here, Brian - awesome, lighthearted write. Blessings hun, hey, when will you start your new contest, Brian? I will be starting one today I think, hope you will enter! Love Kristin
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Date: 8/2/2008 4:52:00 AM
Brian - great job on this one - God Bless
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