Monoku-Icarus

fame,a fleeting flame- oftimes burns,those ahead of the game Inspired by John Keats poem'ON Fame' see my blog today

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/10/2009 11:20:00 AM

Superb write you have penned here Brian..short and sweet yet powerful in its simplicity...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read and comment on my writes~Mary

P Sheart

Date: 12/4/2009 6:35:00 PM

Very wise words full of much truth. Love John Keats. A lot said in this wondeful Monoku. Love Light Patricia

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/4/2009 5:30:00 AM

The RyanAir of his day , Brian . Shame he was only into the sun holidays ....

Daniel Corcoran

Date: 12/4/2009 5:09:00 AM

very good monoku. i did a poem about icarus a while back.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2009 5:00:00 AM

Very much truth in your poetic lines this morning Brian... enjoyed the info on your blog today also.. u do provide a wonderful knowledge and great information for us readers here on Soup... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" P.S.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/4/2009 4:53:00 AM

Keats is ever one of my favorite ... no poet has the pathos of Keats, and only Coleridge approaches his sublimity of vision ... and you, Sir poet, none tell so much as you in brevity. Love it! Peace and love

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/4/2009 4:30:00 AM

Very true! Wonderful monoku, and thank you again so much for all of your kind comments ~Juliane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2009 3:53:00 AM

If one is not ready for the fame, they will get burned. Keep the ideas coming in the form of poetry. Sara