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Mono-Mindedness

Imagine a pie chart Through the middle a line One half is your view The other is mine Now imagine a pie chart All the views of mankind Some see a small slither Same approach everytime appearing knowing and smart They Self justify or deny Never wrong and excusable They're living a lie Terrified insecurity Lives deep down inside If their flaws are seen humiliation they'll die These people never change You have to leave them behind If you don't you'll suffer more Hurting you for their pride

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Gary Radice

Date: 7/11/2021 2:06:00 AM

Your poem served up a great slice of life. Food for thought. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nick. Cheers - Gary

Nick Trim
Date: 7/15/2021 12:26:00 AM

Thanks Gary ??

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2021 2:49:00 AM

Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Nick Trim
Date: 7/10/2021 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Christuraj :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 12:20:00 PM

well said Nick their are a few hypocrites on the site that should read this especially the 3rd stanza - act like victims yet are the victimisers but of course butter wouldnt melt in their mouth. Am done with their bigotry and will never give in to their bullying,. write on my friend!:-) hugs Jan xx

Nick Trim
Date: 7/9/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thanks Jan, don't worry about the bullies they are just pathetic people, clowns lacking intelligence lol