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Monkey Wrench

prehensile primate swinging through the canopy what a gripping tale Hi-ku 2 contest 15/12/2020 Sponsored by Brian strand

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2020 3:57:00 PM

oh what a clever final line no wonder you got a top spot:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/18/2020 12:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan it was the one possible outcome in this case Handy appendage to have, cheers David

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 12/17/2020 2:17:00 PM

Very clever, David. I like your haiku. Congratulations on your win of this clever word-play poem.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/17/2020 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Carol, purely serendipitous, was just waiting to be plucked, cheers David

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/17/2020 9:31:00 AM

David, such a clever and creative haiku. Love the title too! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/17/2020 12:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan, I was playing around with words and out popped this one, I’m sure someone else would’ve eventually thought this up cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2020 3:14:00 PM

love the creativity here. BIG congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/16/2020 3:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea for congrats, I really enjoyed writing this one, came together quite easy, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/16/2020 11:24:00 AM

Very creative David! Love the double entendre. Congratulations on your first place win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/16/2020 1:03:00 PM

I was actually thinking Sam when Writing this, it’s so obvious someone else must have done it before, but apparently not, thanks so much for comments, cheers David