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Monkey Wrench

prehensile primate
 swinging through the canopy 
        what a gripping tale

Hi-ku 2 contest 15/12/2020
Sponsored by Brian strand

allegoryanalogyanimalappreciationhumorhaiku

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Jan Allison

December 17, 2020 at 3:57 PM

oh what a clever final line no wonder you got a top spot:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh

December 18, 2020 at 12:29 AM

Thank you so much Jan it was the one possible outcome in this case Handy appendage to have, cheers David

Susan Ashley

December 17, 2020 at 9:31 AM

David, such a clever and creative haiku. Love the title too! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

David Kavanagh

December 17, 2020 at 12:14 PM

Thank you so much Susan, I was playing around with words and out popped this one, I’m sure someone else would’ve eventually thought this up cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2020 at 3:14 PM

love the creativity here. BIG congrats

David Kavanagh

December 16, 2020 at 3:47 PM

Thank you so much Andrea for congrats, I really enjoyed writing this one, came together quite easy, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

December 16, 2020 at 11:24 AM

Very creative David! Love the double entendre. Congratulations on your first place win!

David Kavanagh

December 16, 2020 at 1:03 PM

I was actually thinking Sam when Writing this, it’s so obvious someone else must have done it before, but apparently not, thanks so much for comments, cheers David

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