Money Spiders (What a Surprise)

What a surprise it was to see
A little spider walking on me
It’s not so bad to get one of these
They bring money enough to please

What a surprise I had today
I won on a scratch card hip hooray
The spider brought me good luck so
I am keeping it and I won’t let it go

What a surprise a had just now
The spider had babies somehow
My luck multiplies to a higher level
Thanks to the spiders I’m a lucky devil

(Not really that lucky lol.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 5:22 PM
funny poem
Knop Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Very funny rhyme, Pam. I should keep more spiders in my flat(!!!). Thank you for commentig my poem Atacama. I also posted a German and a Spanish (the original version) on soup, if you'd like to read these,too. Kind regards and have a good week...Gert
Fraser Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Delightful little creatures the money spiders Pamela, lovely poem >> James
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Sounds like I need the mother load silk cocoon of baby spiders. Keep writing. Sara
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