Money Spiders (What a Surprise)

What a surprise it was to see
A little spider walking on me
It’s not so bad to get one of these
They bring money enough to please

What a surprise I had today
I won on a scratch card hip hooray
The spider brought me good luck so
I am keeping it and I won’t let it go

What a surprise a had just now
The spider had babies somehow
My luck multiplies to a higher level
Thanks to the spiders I’m a lucky devil

(Not really that lucky lol.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/6/2009 5:22:00 PM
funny poem
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:37:00 PM
Very funny rhyme, Pam. I should keep more spiders in my flat(!!!). Thank you for commentig my poem Atacama. I also posted a German and a Spanish (the original version) on soup, if you'd like to read these,too. Kind regards and have a good week...Gert
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Date: 11/4/2009 3:18:00 PM
Delightful little creatures the money spiders Pamela, lovely poem >> James
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Date: 11/4/2009 3:05:00 PM
Sounds like I need the mother load silk cocoon of baby spiders. Keep writing. Sara
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