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Money

Small and meaningless But holds the world in it's hands Money paints us green.

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/6/2012 5:28:00 PM

I have been reading your new poems and enjoy them. Well crafted and good images give. They really seem to me to be more of senryu though, rather than Haiku, since they deal with everyday life and people and the objective world.

Joann Grisetti
Date: 4/6/2012 5:53:00 PM

Actually, the one you read of mine is also a senryu. When I posted I did not know we could select that category. So many mix them up. I grew up in Japan and went to the market weekly and I still remember the fish smell.