Money

A dangerous truth Soft money is stainless steel A folded weapon

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:15:00 PM

Awesome Senyru Abe, it's loaded with thoughts for the readers>>James

David Smalling

Date: 3/30/2009 3:56:00 AM

I came to read this poem but I am attracted to what I need since all jobs in my house are gone, and is not truth ... for money is power still. blessings from above and love

Anna Kittrell

Date: 12/17/2008 9:54:00 AM

I love this. It has such meaning and is absolutely true.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/5/2008 2:52:00 PM

great poem, never thought of it that way.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/4/2008 6:38:00 AM

Great senryu. The phrase "the root to all evil" comes to mind. Glad you liked the haiku. I've been dreaming of summer days, which seem too far away. I recently discovered haiku and I want to do more in the future. Thank you for your kind words. Love Robin

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/3/2008 9:17:00 PM

Very true thought here, money is a dangerous weapon, Love the last line 'a folded weapon' whoa, great senryu...Raul