Monet's Garden

On jade stems iris blooms gently swayed
in hues of lavender, dusty pink and mauve
until pollen seekers were lured to the banquet
of sweetmeats. Within velvet petals they feasted.

In Monet's garden the buddings grew
in variegated colors brushed on a canvas.
Pastel beauties that no fingers dared to cut,
for to be clipped at the height of life meant death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Pretty
Sambourne Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:52 PM
You've caught the vibrancy of Monet's garden so well. Your final line rings true. Cut flowers have a short life span indeed. Sincerest regards, Brian
Logan Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 8:14 PM
Thank you very much, Brian.
Kitchin Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Jenna, a beautiful poem, you captured the essence of Monet's art!
Logan Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Thanks very much, Tania.
Fowler Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 6:16 AM
You depict the Artist's Garden with beauty and truth in your lovely words Jenna. :)
Logan Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Thanks Linda.
Gasun Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 5:34 AM
An excellent panoramic scenery in your word-painting my dear friend and poetess Jenna. Thanks for sharing. I love and enjoyed your poem so much. God bless you always and your writints.
Logan Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Thank you, Len.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 10:23 AM
This is lovely. That last line lingers. xomo
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Thanks for your kinds thoughts, Mo.
Gentile Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Jenna, jade stems and lavender hues drew mw in! Just lovely words to create beauty! Happy Friday xxoo
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Thank you so sincerely, Mike.
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 6:12 AM
So nice Jenna you certainly know how to replicate a wonderful Monet in your poetry, and knowing you probably on canvas too, you’re a gifted talent for sure, cheers David
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:35 AM
aww how sweet a compliment. Thanks so much, David.
Mccann Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 3:10 AM
Lovely, Jenna. You're a treasure. Elizabeth
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
M  Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 2:51 AM
Truly lovely Jenna! Debx
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thanks a lot, Deb.
Parker Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 9:54 PM
Wouldn’t be(e) surprised if the beed tried to suckle the painting. I’ve seen his masterful work. Profound beauty indeed. Worthy poem, JL. Artsy but not fartsy. ~;0)
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:34 AM
His work is phenominal. Thanks, AP.
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February 2, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Aww beautiful poem, let them keep growing: ) last longer , very gracefully written
Logan Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Thank you, Stephan.
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 2:19 PM
Monet inspired you well Jenna, his paintings are amazing but then so is your poetry. Tom
Logan Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 2:35 PM
You are such an encouraging friend, Tom. Thank you ever so much.
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