Monday Morning

Clouds cry on the grass,
Little sprouts springing slowly,
waiting for the sun.

Quiet, birds chirping;
Not a creature bustles today
They sleep with the sun.













By: Juli-Michelle 
Motif: Nature/new poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/29/2017 6:44:00 PM
Totally delightful. Beautifully done, Julie-Michelle.
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Date: 7/16/2014 10:03:00 PM
Great one Juli-Michelle! I love Haiku!
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:52:00 PM
What a lovely, and cheerful way to wake up on a Monday morning, !! Love this!
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Date: 3/20/2014 2:34:00 PM
you write good haiku ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/20/2014 5:00:00 AM
Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, juli
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Date: 3/20/2014 4:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Juli.Michelle ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:01:00 AM
Juli-Michelle , Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 10:36:00 PM
Juli, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 5:16:00 PM
congrats on win; I knew beforehand that these haiku were winners :) // paul
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Date: 3/19/2014 3:36:00 PM
Well penned Haiku Juli-Michelle. Congratulations on your win in GV contest.... Verlena
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Date: 3/19/2014 2:37:00 PM
Nice written..." They sleep with the sun "...super...Best wishes from India...
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Date: 3/18/2014 6:49:00 PM
such a peaceful little vignette on your springtime day!
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Date: 3/17/2014 7:30:00 PM
The first line did it for me, then I was hooked...
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Date: 3/17/2014 7:05:00 PM
Excellent! Love the quiet hour[s] before dawn. Thanks for a double shot of your beautiful poetry. :D
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Date: 3/17/2014 6:34:00 PM
The quietness of the morning is soothing to the soul! Your poetry is also. My best, chuck
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Date: 3/17/2014 12:50:00 PM
- It's spring whispering quietly ..... coming soon - Lovely haiku, Juli- Michelle :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2014 10:30:00 AM
two pretty haiku; love them :) // paul
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Date: 3/17/2014 10:29:00 AM
Had a very tough... but your cheerful wee poem made my sun shine! Thank you sweetie! Loving hugs, Jack XOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2014 10:30:00 AM
"tough WINTER" that is...
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