Monarchs

I thought the landscape burst in sudden flame
with embers wild cavorting in the glare
of dawning sun, but boundless sparks became
a throng of monarchs flitting through the air.

Arbitrium Divisa 5
Gregory R Barden 
12/18/19

Original Poem:  Pixie Dragons
9/18/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Inman Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:44 PM
Great imagery Dale.
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Thanks, James.
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January 14, 2020 at 7:04 PM
This is wonderful! Exciting! Great description.
Cozart Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:27 PM
Thanks very much, Joe.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:58 AM
I thought I might see this beauty and 1st place. I am so happy it is.Congratulations my friend. xxoo
Cozart Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 10:08 AM
This is wonderful imagery Dale, congrats on a top win in Greg's contest!
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January 14, 2020 at 10:21 AM
Thanks very much, John.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 10:32 PM
The imagery in these few lines is really amazing Dale. It is quite beautiful and I’m sure will do well. New year blessings my friend. xxoo
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January 12, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Thanks so much, Connie. Happy New year. It's wonderful to hear from you.
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 9:37 PM
wow one of the best I have viewed for his contest! Happy new year, my friend.
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January 3, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Thanks very much, Andrea. Happy New Year!
Green Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Beautiful Dale. Best wishes in the contest
Cozart Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Thanks very much, Chris.
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