Mom's Bestilled Breath Awakes

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Mom's Bestilled Breath Awakes 1----1----1 heaven mom prays silently watching follows 2----2----2 like night follows day her breath awakes me ------------ 2020 October 05 *4th Place* Writing Challenge - Septolet Form ~~Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2020 6:55:00 AM

William, great image and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/11/2020 11:34:00 AM

Thankful as always for offering another opportunity, Constance, Aloha! William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2020 5:58:00 PM

a very loving poem, William. Congrats

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/10/2020 5:59:00 PM

Many thanks, Andrea, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2020 1:32:00 PM

- A lovely poem, William :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/10/2020 1:34:00 PM

We thank you, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/6/2020 4:53:00 AM

No better whisper than Mom's to sooth her child. Well done, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/6/2020 10:39:00 AM

Awake am I, Vijay, many thanks, Aloha! William

Marilene Evans

Date: 10/5/2020 11:15:00 PM

Beautiful poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/5/2020 11:19:00 PM

Thank you, Marilene