William Kelii Kekaula Poet Verse

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Mom's Bestilled Breath Awakes

Mom's Bestilled Breath Awakes

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heaven 

mom prays

silently
watching

follows

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like night 
follows day

her breath

awakes 
me

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2020 October 05
*4th Place*
Writing Challenge - Septolet Form
~~Constance La France

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Constance La France October 11, 2020 at 6:55 AM William, great image and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet _Constance William Kelii Kekaula October 11, 2020 at 11:34 AM Thankful as always for offering another opportunity, Constance, Aloha! William

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2020 at 5:58 PM a very loving poem, William. Congrats William Kelii Kekaula October 10, 2020 at 5:59 PM Many thanks, Andrea, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2020 at 1:32 PM - A lovely poem, William :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula October 10, 2020 at 1:34 PM We thank you, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William

Vijay Pandit October 6, 2020 at 4:53 AM No better whisper than Mom's to sooth her child. Well done, William. William Kelii Kekaula October 6, 2020 at 10:39 AM Awake am I, Vijay, many thanks, Aloha! William

Marilene Evans October 5, 2020 at 11:15 PM Beautiful poem! William Kelii Kekaula October 5, 2020 at 11:19 PM Thank you, Marilene