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contest 2024 Not for Contest Poetry Contest

sponsor Silent One

As you are my love beneath a full moon a rendered silhouette in splayed light our arms are empty as our eyes consume in wondrous dreams that lay before the night the scent of fragrant love shares its rapture fills the senses with our sensual glance when emotion overtakes and capture we treasure the heart of our jeweled romance how quiet and naked is our desire how tenderly warm our hands are when held closer to the edge of moments prior when lips softly touch and begin to meld as the mouth of lover's drip nectared bliss slowly their lips will part from their first kiss

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Date: 1/20/2024 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:24:00 AM
You do sonnets so well with perfect rhymes and flows and a romantic at heart.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:11:00 AM
What a blissful and romantic poem this is so well woven for silent ones contest, I believe he would love this one, as he too writes romance so well, so this poem should do very well . I love your rhymes and flow and soulful touch to your poem that is so mellifluous and evocative: pleasure always reading your work dear Frederick: you’ve nailed it
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Date: 1/6/2024 9:50:00 AM
Oh, this is such an eloquent and romantically resplendent poem, hued with the elegant shimmers of love and its bliss.. Your rhymes here are impeccably smooth, creating an exquisite flow and your wordplay is so delicate.. "we treasure the heart of our jeweled romance", wow.. Wonderfully knitted.. Quite enticing and poetically gorgeous!
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Date: 1/5/2024 9:37:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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