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Memories store moments in time, from devastating to sublime replayed in silent pantomime; only I see. I see myself leaning to crawl, smiling when I'd stumble and fall and bang my nogin on the wall; as a toddler. I sometimes recall hurtful things, like beatings or bumblebee stings that draw tears, tugging my heartstrings; from shadows past. But I prefer snapshots of joy, like when I was a little boy and Santa brought me a new toy; on Christmas morn. I'd shimmy up trees way back then before I joined the world of men, when I was maybe nine or ten; I loved the woods. A storehouse for hyperbole, memories script reality.

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Date: 11/12/2022 12:37:00 AM
Emile, you have penned a lovely Tail-rhyme with wonderful memories and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, well done !
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement and of course, your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2022 2:53:00 AM
Great chilhood memories writen in tail-Rhyme beautifully. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:36:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2022 4:14:00 PM
I love this, Emile. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/8/2022 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.

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