Moments

© Ben Burton 7/3/2016

It's such a tender moment when a father holds his infant
As his face exudes both wonderment and joy
For in his wildest fantasies he could not really "get it"
How his love's the same for little girl or boy

It's such a trying moment when a mom drops off her toddler
At a day care while she takes care of some chores
And as she walks away she hears, "Oh no, don't leave, me Mommy!"
And her heart breaks for she knows she must ignore

It's such a special moment when the family's together
A reunion that's four generations deep
And the chatter during dinner has an echo of forever
Though the members will have changed next time they meet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/28/2017 8:19:00 PM
Hello Ben this is a beautiful poem you wrote. I can feel the struggle of the mother to leave her child at day care. A very good write. have anice day my friend.
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Date: 7/4/2016 5:31:00 AM
Beautiful moments indeed in the "echo of forever" ... Nice poem ...
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Ben Burton
Date: 7/4/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Probir. Happy 4th, wherever you might be!
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