Moments

One moment, Just one, Can change everything. Whether it be good, or bad. Everything can turn to nothing. Or simply nothing can turn into a catastrophe. A simple moment can turn it from great, to greater, even sometime from great.. to absolute horror. What do you make of these moments? Did you turn left instead of right? That moment can determine The rhythm of your entire life. So which way will you go? Left? Or right?

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:39:00 PM

Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.

Angel Garcia

Date: 5/24/2016 3:39:00 PM

I really like this one. This poem reminds me of this song I really like that about fate and new encounters. It's kinda bittersweet in a way. With some goodbyes there are new beginnings. I like that concept.

Gautam Shankar Banerjee

Date: 5/17/2016 10:57:00 PM

The poem Moments conveys the emotion of fear more the joy of success as life is full of failures. This is a great poem as it makes people aware of the utility of time.