Moment To Indulge

There we stand beneath a leaf ridded tree
Holding one another gazing deeply with eyes locked 
We listen to the tall delicate grass sway in the wind 
Across the calm waters the moon floats full
Beams of glowing light spread throughout the horizon
The indigo sky sparkles with glittery stars 
This is a night full of dreams and intense emotions
Extraordinary opportunity to feast on each others lips

by: Virginia Frayer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/18/2011 10:02:00 AM
What beautiful images of these lovers standing beneath the tree at night, Virginia. Keep the "feast" going, dear. There is nothing greater than love! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:05:00 PM
Love the ending... perfect! Julie
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:30:00 AM
*MELTS*!!! Amazing! My goodness...I live for moments like that. Great job!
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