Eve Roper Poet Monorhyme

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Moment Stolen In Time Beside Me Lay

As I stand by the kitchen window I must say
My chin against my chest spent from working all day
Warm wet soapsuds adhere to my hands as I pray
Washing the seasoned tableware, running away
Unfasten thoughts of daily drudgery workday

An incredible tranquil moment sets at bay
As I gaze out and see the caramel gateway
The sun’s glow starts to wane at a distance  array
Warm honey caramel  bathed yard melting a  way
Freezing  out my emotions from the day to day
Reality dream walking through a hue archway
A fond moment   stolen  in time  beside me lay


1/15/2017

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Mark Martin January 31, 2017 at 2:10 PM Love the contrast between the two stanzas - drudgery and beauty. Congratulations Eve! :-)

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 8:06 PM glad to see this one again though in my eyes, it's a even better than the placement you gto.Congrats, Eve. Eve Roper January 28, 2017 at 9:57 PM Thank you :') I couldn't ask for a more inspiring compliment Hugs

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 8:06 PM and that picture was so inspiring

Janis Medders Tobechi January 28, 2017 at 4:40 PM Calm and evening serenity. That is what I feel when I read this monorhyme. Well written. Congrats. a 7.

John Hamilton January 28, 2017 at 11:17 AM Beautiful write Eve, if not for repeating day three times this would have been number 1, congrats anyway on a fine placement.

Joseph May January 27, 2017 at 7:44 PM Beautiful write Eve..Congrats on your win

Sandra Haight January 27, 2017 at 6:26 PM A beautiful Monorhyme with lovely imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 20, 2017 at 12:29 PM Such a lovely monorhyme, Eve. I love the 'warm honey caramel' atmosphere which you create. It would be a pity were moments such as this one to go to waste! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 17, 2017 at 8:48 PM wow, you took that picture and used it for a beautiful monorhyme. Very nice, Eve!! Eve Roper January 17, 2017 at 8:59 PM I didn't enter the Nette's contest, but I saw the picture and reminded me of my window in my kitchen.. Thank you

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2017 at 8:44 PM Beautiful images in this one! Eve Roper January 17, 2017 at 8:59 PM Thank you, Kim :)

Afzal Nusker January 16, 2017 at 11:54 PM Wow...you captured the joy of the moment so beautifully, Eve. "Warm honey caramel bathed yard melting a way," is such a lovely line. A 7 Eve Roper January 17, 2017 at 9:00 PM Thank you so very much, Afzal, :)

Jan Allison January 16, 2017 at 3:55 PM wow Eve I hope this is for John's contest its a lovely flowing monorhyme and the imagery is beautiful I especially love that caramel gateway:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:36 PM Hello, Jan, this is for John.. but I'm getting shy over my writes. Thank you so very much for your wonderful presence and your inspirational compliment.

Wilfred Aniagyei January 16, 2017 at 2:36 PM This is amazing, so surreal I have a similar piece ... A 7 Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:52 PM Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment Hugs

Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 9:59 AM Simply beautiful Eve. I love the poem and the last line/titled were mesmerizing. Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:51 PM Thank you so very much, Chris. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis January 16, 2017 at 9:49 AM Ah my dearest, Eve, what a gem! Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:51 PM Thank you dear friend

Probir Gupta January 16, 2017 at 6:49 AM Beautiful moment ... Beautifully said ... A perfect moment ... in the caramel scent ... Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:50 PM Thank you, Probir, my kitchen window looks out to the sun going down and it always makes me feel reinvigorated

Joanna Daniel January 16, 2017 at 4:35 AM Profoundly beautiful, Eve:) Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:44 PM Thank you, Jo, so much <3