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How much stark evidence, how many proofs will be dismissed before conceit it fails; and of His mercy decide to avail this presumptuous species from faith aloof. Flashbang rumble! A thousand unseen hoofs galloped overhead, as clattering hail mass-pogoed as if emptied from some vast pail upon unsuspecting Tarmac and roofs. Mercy, I swear I heard the atoms split from molecules to create ozone as, outside close nearby the lightning hit; its acrid tang prevalent in a home, which for a charged instant that bolt lit: thrilling spectator as he watched alone.

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Date: 12/11/2014 11:20:00 AM
Hi Perry! Just awesome! Very powerful verses here my dear friend.i truly enjoyed it! A solid 7 for you! Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 12/16/2014 3:45:00 PM
Thank you again, Dorian - praise indeed from you.
Date: 12/10/2014 4:54:00 PM
Lightning storm? unique, 'electrifying' write Perry! Keith:-)
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 12/11/2014 2:47:00 AM
Thanks, Keith.

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