Moment of Truth

How much stark evidence, how many proofs 
will be dismissed before conceit it fails; 
and of His mercy decide to avail 
this presumptuous species from faith aloof. 
Flashbang rumble! A thousand unseen hoofs 
galloped overhead, as clattering hail 
mass-pogoed as if emptied from some vast pail 
upon unsuspecting Tarmac and roofs.  

Mercy, I swear I heard the atoms split 
from molecules to create ozone 
as, outside close nearby the lightning hit; 
its acrid tang prevalent in a home, 
which for a charged instant that bolt lit: 
thrilling spectator as he watched alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Hi Perry! Just awesome! Very powerful verses here my dear friend.i truly enjoyed it! A solid 7 for you! Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Thank you again, Dorian - praise indeed from you.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 4:54 PM
Lightning storm? unique, 'electrifying' write Perry! Keith:-)
Mcdaid Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Thanks, Keith.
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