Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway Poet Rhyme

Moment In Time

It was a gray midwinter day
Trees were bare
Frost filled the air
Blankets of snow everywhere
Yet, you were there...

The fireplace glow our hearts fill
Passion shows
Goose bump chills
Singing winds blow
Crackling wood below

Love burns even in snow...

Lay

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Robert A. Dufresne June 1, 2011 at 2:39 PM very romantic with nice imagery. NIce to see your name in my comment box, Lay. I've missed you.. great poem .. puts the reader there

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 24, 2011 at 8:59 AM this moment in time is precious and luv burns even in snow is the most fantastic line yet Lay.. just wrote a poem and my end line was "marriage melts butter" ..kinda like the same thought luv.. appreciate your encouraging comments.. that card poem WAS a challenge.. and I luv them..all..luv..