Moment In Time

It was a gray midwinter day Trees were bare Frost filled the air Blankets of snow everywhere Yet, you were there... The fireplace glow our hearts fill Passion shows Goose bump chills Singing winds blow Crackling wood below Love burns even in snow... Lay

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/1/2011 2:39:00 PM

very romantic with nice imagery. NIce to see your name in my comment box, Lay. I've missed you.. great poem .. puts the reader there

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2011 8:59:00 AM

this moment in time is precious and luv burns even in snow is the most fantastic line yet Lay.. just wrote a poem and my end line was "marriage melts butter" ..kinda like the same thought luv.. appreciate your encouraging comments.. that card poem WAS a challenge.. and I luv them..all..luv..