Moment

 

Without a ripple, the world moved, 
Heeded a whisper uttered into a secluded room, 
I felt every last drop of blood drawn, 
All the sketches shared in our times alone, 
Though in a blink the tides turned white, 
All the pigments burnt out of sight, 
An eternal elegance is forever etched, 
For embroidering a love into me 
only is orchestrated  in visual effects,
the moments we wove in the midst of sublime storytelling, 
We dreamt of a hill we knew was so unbecoming,
We were bound by bare beauty and synchronized strength, 
Yet so little to teach in each other’s length, 
A short-lived hope 
Slid right down the slope,
With no time to cope,
I guess this is why love letters come in a little envelope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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July 12, 2026 at 12:16 AM
Hello papi, First of all who you writing love letters to ? Huh! Without my knowledge! You sneaky little lioness! I always knew you would be upto some mischief in silence hunting huntress! Hahah! Well i love this poem! Because youv cut out the sarcasm and given something which is evocative and has depth! The flow and metaphors and rhythm of rhymes here is beyond exquisite! Just one of your best in my eyes papi! Now if you send letters, ask me for tips atleast! Hahah love letters in the sand, i remember you! Haha i am singing! Sending you light always
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July 12, 2026 at 12:46 AM
Hahahhaah thank u papi… just reminiscing on a once upon a time love that actually listened to every beat of my heart… short lived but good quality love aeee … XDXDXD!!.. ofcox i would never weave letters of love without u aeee .. thank u for enjoying my piece papi.. up next humorous pieces aeee .. hahahaha this song sounds familiar lemme google this one aee
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