Moment

Quote By Poet "I do not know where the time goes. It just goes running away." I do not know where the time goes, from the opening of a day to it's close. It just goes running away, time will not stay here to play. Life is made up of time, some good times or some sad times we must climb. These times will be very special, with a moment sprinkled in our life's vessel. Everyone can remember their first kiss, a very special moment in time we did not miss. I can still remember a teacher embarrassing me, it was not a good moment in time I just wanted to flee. Moment and time walk hand and hand, it may not be what we have planned.

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Len Gasun

Date: 11/18/2023 7:32:00 PM

This is an amazing, heartwarming poem my dearest friend. Love the flow from start to end and the two ending lines are brilliant words of wisdom. Embracing this gem and you along with the beautiful quote on top. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! More blessing to you and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:14:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you found my write to be amazing/heartwarming. You put a smile on my heart. Thanks with hugs.... Have a blessed/wonderful weekend............

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 11/17/2023 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Paula Well defined moment.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:10:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Moment" write. Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Valsa George

Date: 11/16/2023 6:45:00 PM

Yes, time flies moment by moment ! Some moments in life are unforgettable that they give us joy or resentment or sorrow. Beautifully written Paula. Congratulations on your great win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "Moment" write. Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Charles Messina

Date: 11/16/2023 6:43:00 PM

Yes, "Time" sometimes it goes by slow, but more times than not it goes by too quickly. Very well written, Paula. Congratulations on your top win! Charlie :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 10:06:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you found my write to be very well written. That makes me happy... Have a blessed/wonderful weekend............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/16/2023 5:58:00 PM

Back to say congratulations on your win Paula in Constance’s contest… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. Also glad you like my "Moment" write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed/wonderful day...........

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/16/2023 1:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest top winner, Paula. Your new poem is such a wonderful subject and thoughts. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Moment" write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2023 7:15:00 AM

"1 Place" ~ Moment ~ Date Written:11/10/2023

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2023 4:05:00 PM

This is so true, all the big firsts, for sure.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/16/2023 7:24:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad my like my "Moment" write. Great first moments are the best kind to have. Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Ink Empress

Date: 11/15/2023 12:24:00 PM

You always write such resonating poems dear paula, i felt the teacher line so much because i can never forget that too, its definitely not a pleasant one for an 8 year old. I can see why this is a top winner. Congratulations paula well deserved

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/16/2023 7:22:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Moment" write. Great moments are the best kind to have. No child should have embarrassing moments from a teacher. Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/15/2023 9:58:00 AM

"I can still remember a teacher embarrassing me, it was not a good moment in time I just wanted to flee" My favorite line, Paula. Especially when they get your name wrong! lol. xhugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my "Moment" write. I can still remember some wonderful teachers/some really bad ones. No child should have embarrassing moments from a teacher. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Regina Elliott

Date: 11/15/2023 1:48:00 AM

Hi Paula, yes, time is so fleeting, it doesn't pause. You've written well of this here. Keep up your great penning! :))))

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2023 11:39:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad my like my "Moment" write. Just a thought, time never stops. It might be good if it did. Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/14/2023 6:32:00 PM

Excellent Paula, I don’t know where the times goes either, it does seem to go faster the older we get. A great moment poem and quote. Keep writing, Belle

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/16/2023 5:56:00 PM

My dad said the same as your aunt and I used to think that it was nonsense, soon realised it was true, the older one grows the faster time flows. Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2023 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my write to be excellent/a great moment poem/quote. That puts a smile on my heart. Thanks... When I was young, my dear aunt would say time went by faster as we got older. I did not believe her/now I see what she was talking about. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/14/2023 10:24:00 AM

I think we all feel that as we age time seems to run away fast for us. Well said in this piece. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad my like my "Moment" write. Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Silent One

Date: 11/12/2023 11:27:00 PM

I think many will feel the same way.. you expressed it so well..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/13/2023 11:36:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad my enjoyed my "Moment" write. Have a blessed/wonderful~day/week.............

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/10/2023 2:32:00 PM

Your poem captivated me, Paula, for I, too, have some similar thoughts. I agree, moment and time walk hand in hand...sometimes our moments are unplanned. Well said! Enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/11/2023 1:53:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad my write captivated you. Yes, some moments are unplanned. Guess that is life. Have a blessed/wonderful weekend............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2023 12:50:00 PM

- As true as you say, Paula ... even if they fly super fast ... some moments will always live in our hearts :) - A wonderful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/11/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for your best wishes. Glad you found my write to be wonderful. Yes, some moments will always live in our hearts. Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful weekend............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/10/2023 12:27:00 PM

Moment ~ Date Written:11/10/2023