MOM

A empty page awaits the perfect words I hope will convey what I feel when looking back at the lifetime we shared.  

But I am at a loss for words, for none hold the weight that my heart holds today, now out of sync with the world I once knew, missing beat after beat without you. 

 
August 22nd 1929 – May 23rd, 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/21/2025 10:26:00 AM
Great to read you back at the Soup Elaine. It’s just a pity that it’s under such sad circumstances. So sorry to hear about your loss. Your elegy is beautifully and masterfully written. Cheers - Gary
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Elaine George
Date: 6/23/2025 2:32:00 PM
Thank you, Gary. I hope to get back to the Soup soon.
Date: 6/3/2025 12:58:00 PM
Hello, Elegy, well thank u for giving me an example of what it is. I invite u to my poetrysoup hp and choose a poem to read n comment on if u like, but how do I know u visited right? Enjoy n Take Care ~Jac
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Date: 6/2/2025 3:06:00 PM
Lainey! Wow been so long. And such a sad poem. I lost mine 11/23 and dad 6/24. I've done a few tributes to dad, but haven't been inspired to do a mom poem yet. Wishing you peace
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Elaine George
Date: 6/23/2025 2:30:00 PM
How nice to hear from you, Tom. I don't write on PoetrySoup as often these days. Too much going on in my life. My Mom would have turned 96 in August. Somehow, life goes on without them, but it will never be the same.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/2/2025 3:06:00 PM
PS. My wife lost her mom in February. She was 93
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