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Molten Gem

dark jigsaw clouds simmer above the molten gem ablaze in an amber sky the flaming pearl sinks low nestled in the hill as its embers fade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/25/2017 1:54:00 PM
This is beautiful Joseph :)
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Date: 4/29/2017 6:24:00 PM
Gorgeous nature imagery, JOseph.
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Date: 4/29/2017 10:27:00 AM
Lovely imagery - very well-written, Joseph. Regards, John.
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:37:00 PM
Hi Joseph, You painted beautiful picture with words. Great imagery: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/26/2017 6:22:00 PM
wow your imagery is amazing Joseph in this little gem of a poem Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2017 6:14:00 PM
Joseph May,nice to meet you. As I read this poem I could see all the amber sky. So beautiful to see.
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