Molten Gem

dark jigsaw clouds
  simmer above the molten gem
 ablaze in an amber sky
  the flaming pearl sinks low
 nestled in the hill 
 as its embers fade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 1:54 PM
This is beautiful Joseph :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Gorgeous nature imagery, JOseph.
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April 29, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Lovely imagery - very well-written, Joseph. Regards, John.
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April 26, 2017 at 11:37 PM
Hi Joseph, You painted beautiful picture with words. Great imagery: -) Alexis
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 6:22 PM
wow your imagery is amazing Joseph in this little gem of a poem Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
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