Molecules

A log is burning
Some cream is churning
Soon both of them will change
The log to ashes
The cream to butter
But, aren't they still the same

sciencelight verse

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Line Gauthier

September 7, 2024 at 11:10 AM

love it~

Warren Doll

September 7, 2024 at 11:55 AM

Line, thanks so much. I'm glad that you liked it~ Warren

Mahtab Bangalee

February 13, 2019 at 9:32 PM

awesome/// the losing of self existence

Warren Doll

February 20, 2019 at 5:01 PM

I hadn't thought of it this way. You have a unique insight, Mahtab. All the best~ Warren

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 13, 2019 at 6:15 PM

Hello Warren Doll, No they are not the same. Nicely done. have a nice evening my friend.

Warren Doll

February 20, 2019 at 4:58 PM

Hi Darlene thanks for your point of view and visit. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Maurice Rigoler

December 13, 2018 at 8:09 PM

According to the the French aristocrat Lavoisier, yes, the remain the same. Look him up on the Internet, if you're interested. Sadly Lavoisier lost his head during the Reign of Terror. Many thanks for stopping by and getting a laugh from my verse. / M

Warren Doll

February 10, 2019 at 5:09 PM

Hi Maurice, thanks for the information. I'll look him up. Always glad to get your comments. Warmest Wishes~ Warren