Molecules

A log is burning Some cream is churning Soon both of them will change The log to ashes The cream to butter But, aren't they still the same

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/13/2019 9:32:00 PM

awesome/// the losing of self existence

Warren Doll
Date: 2/20/2019 5:01:00 PM

I hadn't thought of it this way. You have a unique insight, Mahtab. All the best~ Warren

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/13/2019 6:15:00 PM

Hello Warren Doll, No they are not the same. Nicely done. have a nice evening my friend.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/20/2019 4:58:00 PM

Hi Darlene thanks for your point of view and visit. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/13/2018 8:09:00 PM

According to the the French aristocrat Lavoisier, yes, the remain the same. Look him up on the Internet, if you're interested. Sadly Lavoisier lost his head during the Reign of Terror. Many thanks for stopping by and getting a laugh from my verse. / M

Warren Doll
Date: 2/10/2019 5:09:00 PM

Hi Maurice, thanks for the information. I'll look him up. Always glad to get your comments. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/30/2018 1:03:00 PM

Wonderful intelligent musing, enjoyed!

Warren Doll
Date: 3/30/2018 4:20:00 PM

I am very glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for you very positive comment

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/30/2018 1:01:00 PM

Interesting, the physics or our universe, great thought !!!

Warren Doll
Date: 3/30/2018 4:22:00 PM

Let's talk about it later. Thanks for the reply