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Moist Smoke

Flickering light of chandelier dims, timid blinks become audacious, fragrant whispers intermingle in crevices, fingers orchestrate enchanting invites, blazing a mystic smoke that escapes, vents of love in raging storms of night, to envelope mists of hushed union, beads of Aurora sparkle at dawn June 3, 2020 SOME KIND OF SENSUAL Poetry Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud Theme: Smoke 44 words, checked with wordcounter.net ~Winner: First Place BRIAN'S SELECT 4,any form,any theme Poetry Contest ~Winner: First Place

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2020 4:44:00 PM

Both your sensual content and smoke shape are striking and creative, Aditi. Congrtaulation son placing first. Regards // paul

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/9/2020 8:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful words of appreciation Paul. :) God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2020 3:46:00 PM

Congratulations for your win. Your pen was using a paint brush. I like how you think outside the box. You do beautiful work. Enjoy your win and day...........

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/9/2020 8:07:00 AM

Thank you for such a lovely comment Paula. Blessed by your kind words of appreciation. God bless you. Have a blessed day :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/8/2020 1:42:00 PM

How you express yourself is what makes your poetry unique and qualifies it as art, well done my friend.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 1:59:00 PM

I am blessed by your wonderful words of appreciation Emile. Thank you so much for your visit and kind words :)

V. Deepa

Date: 6/8/2020 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations for your top win mam.:-) It's an highly captivating sensual work on Smoke.You always write extraordinary poems which surely deserves the placement.:-)Best wishes mam. Take care.Much love~Deepa

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 7:12:00 AM

Thank you for your constant uplifting words dear Deepa. Glad you love my words. Blessed to receive your appreciation. Blessings and love to you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/8/2020 12:41:00 AM

awesome verse, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 7:11:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation Eve. God bless you. Much love :)

John Watt

Date: 6/7/2020 8:32:00 PM

Filled with sensual mystique. Like Greg stated, you leave room for the reader's imagination to create their interpretation. Congratulations on your #1 placement, Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 7:10:00 AM

Thank you for your uplifting words like always John. I am glad to receive appreciation from you. God bless you :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/7/2020 7:19:00 PM

congratulations Aditi, for your win in nette's contest...well done

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 7:09:00 AM

Thank you for appreciating Frederic :)

David Mohn

Date: 6/7/2020 5:49:00 PM

Wonderful poem Aditi...congrats on this 1st place beauty :)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 7:09:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation David :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/6/2020 6:50:00 AM

This feels like lights flickering as you read. Well done! Wow!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:14:00 AM

Glad you loved it Caren. Thank you :)

John Watt

Date: 6/5/2020 2:01:00 AM

Good to see another top placement for you, my poetry friend, and to see more exposure for your wonderful imaginative writing. God bless you, John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 6:16:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement dear friend. Always blessed by your words. Have a good day :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/5/2020 1:01:00 AM

Beautifully sensual write, Aditi - the reader's imagination is our grandest tool, but not everyone can wield it properly ... this does so perfectly! Excellent - I enjoyed this thoroughly - blessings! :o) <3

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:58:00 AM

I am glad my muse could make you imagine that picture. Thank you for your gracious words and appreciation Greg. God bless you :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2020 8:41:00 PM

I love this tasteful and beautiful entry Aditi. I always think the imagination paints a much more sensuous picture instead of graphic words. Gorgeous! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:57:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Connie. I am glad my imagination could make you feel the emotions. Blessings :)

John Watt

Date: 6/3/2020 11:51:00 AM

Well, this is some kind of sensual! I enjoyed it very much and expect you will do very well in the contest, my friend. Blessings to you ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 2:34:00 AM

I am glad you enjoyed my words dear friend. Thank you for your lovely blessings. Have a good day :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 11:05:00 AM

A wonderful write so much said with few words, should do well in the contest!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 2:33:00 AM

You generous appreciation means a lot John. Thank you for your kind words :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/3/2020 8:40:00 AM

Love your take on the theme, my friend...a winner in my court, Aditi...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/3/2020 9:39:00 AM

An appreciation from Wingster means a lot. Thanks so much dear friend. Blessings :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/3/2020 7:14:00 AM

Lovely poem Aditi--sensual in its beat ....tender words of love!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/3/2020 7:34:00 AM

Glad you loved it Vijay :) Thank you for your appreciation.