Aditi Mishra Poet Free verse

Moist Smoke

                    Flickering light of 
                      chandelier dims,
                         timid blinks  
                           become audacious,
                            fragrant whispers 
                             intermingle in crevices,
                            fingers orchestrate 
                           enchanting invites,
                            blazing a mystic 
                              smoke that escapes,
                                vents of love 
                                  in raging storms 
                                    of night,
                                     to envelope mists 
                                     of hushed union,
                                     beads of Aurora
                                   sparkle at dawn

June 3, 2020
SOME KIND OF SENSUAL Poetry Contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Theme: Smoke
44 words, checked with wordcounter.net
~Winner: First Place

BRIAN'S SELECT 4,any form,any theme Poetry Contest
~Winner: First Place

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Paul Callus June 8, 2020 at 4:44 PM Both your sensual content and smoke shape are striking and creative, Aditi. Congrtaulation son placing first. Regards // paul Aditi Mishra June 9, 2020 at 8:07 AM Thank you so much for your wonderful words of appreciation Paul. :) God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith June 8, 2020 at 3:46 PM Congratulations for your win. Your pen was using a paint brush. I like how you think outside the box. You do beautiful work. Enjoy your win and day........... Aditi Mishra June 9, 2020 at 8:07 AM Thank you for such a lovely comment Paula. Blessed by your kind words of appreciation. God bless you. Have a blessed day :)

Emile Pinet June 8, 2020 at 1:42 PM How you express yourself is what makes your poetry unique and qualifies it as art, well done my friend. Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 1:59 PM I am blessed by your wonderful words of appreciation Emile. Thank you so much for your visit and kind words :)

V. Deepa June 8, 2020 at 6:41 AM Congratulations for your top win mam.:-) It's an highly captivating sensual work on Smoke.You always write extraordinary poems which surely deserves the placement.:-)Best wishes mam. Take care.Much love~Deepa Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:12 AM Thank you for your constant uplifting words dear Deepa. Glad you love my words. Blessed to receive your appreciation. Blessings and love to you :)

Eve Roper June 8, 2020 at 12:41 AM awesome verse, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:11 AM Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation Eve. God bless you. Much love :)

John Watt June 7, 2020 at 8:32 PM Filled with sensual mystique. Like Greg stated, you leave room for the reader's imagination to create their interpretation. Congratulations on your #1 placement, Aditi! Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:10 AM Thank you for your uplifting words like always John. I am glad to receive appreciation from you. God bless you :)

Frederic Parker June 7, 2020 at 7:19 PM congratulations Aditi, for your win in nette's contest...well done Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:09 AM Thank you for appreciating Frederic :)

David Mohn June 7, 2020 at 5:49 PM Wonderful poem Aditi...congrats on this 1st place beauty :) Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:09 AM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation David :)

Caren Krutsinger June 6, 2020 at 6:50 AM This feels like lights flickering as you read. Well done! Wow! Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 10:14 AM Glad you loved it Caren. Thank you :)

John Watt June 5, 2020 at 2:01 AM Good to see another top placement for you, my poetry friend, and to see more exposure for your wonderful imaginative writing. God bless you, John Aditi Mishra June 5, 2020 at 6:16 AM Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement dear friend. Always blessed by your words. Have a good day :)

Gregory Richard Barden June 5, 2020 at 1:01 AM Beautifully sensual write, Aditi - the reader's imagination is our grandest tool, but not everyone can wield it properly ... this does so perfectly! Excellent - I enjoyed this thoroughly - blessings! :o) <3 Aditi Mishra June 5, 2020 at 1:58 AM I am glad my muse could make you imagine that picture. Thank you for your gracious words and appreciation Greg. God bless you :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 8:41 PM I love this tasteful and beautiful entry Aditi. I always think the imagination paints a much more sensuous picture instead of graphic words. Gorgeous! Blessings xxoo Aditi Mishra June 5, 2020 at 1:57 AM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Connie. I am glad my imagination could make you feel the emotions. Blessings :)

John Watt June 3, 2020 at 11:51 AM Well, this is some kind of sensual! I enjoyed it very much and expect you will do very well in the contest, my friend. Blessings to you ~ John Aditi Mishra June 4, 2020 at 2:34 AM I am glad you enjoyed my words dear friend. Thank you for your lovely blessings. Have a good day :)

John Hamilton June 3, 2020 at 11:05 AM A wonderful write so much said with few words, should do well in the contest! Aditi Mishra June 4, 2020 at 2:33 AM You generous appreciation means a lot John. Thank you for your kind words :)

Winged Warrior June 3, 2020 at 8:40 AM Love your take on the theme, my friend...a winner in my court, Aditi...love & hugs...^WW^ :o) Aditi Mishra June 3, 2020 at 9:39 AM An appreciation from Wingster means a lot. Thanks so much dear friend. Blessings :)

Vijay Pandit June 3, 2020 at 7:14 AM Lovely poem Aditi--sensual in its beat ....tender words of love! Aditi Mishra June 3, 2020 at 7:34 AM Glad you loved it Vijay :) Thank you for your appreciation.