Mohican

Hardwood floats on
 river ever flowing
Deepest roots hold still



12/29/21: '60s Grand Banks 42 - Village West

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I Am Anaya

August 17, 2022 at 5:28 PM

Boating, anchored on the Mohican River. My interpretation of an immersing haiku!

Susan Woodrow

August 17, 2022 at 5:37 PM

Hi Anaya! I love knowing your interpretation -thank you :) the wooden boat’s name was Mohican and she was on the San Joaquin River :)

Kim Rodrigues

February 10, 2022 at 4:24 AM

Very nice!

Susan Woodrow

February 15, 2022 at 7:06 PM

thank you :)

Chris Green

January 7, 2022 at 10:11 AM

I love the thoughts this creates. Constant and timeless while never letting go. Beautifully crafted Susan.

Susan Woodrow

January 8, 2022 at 2:40 PM

thank you, Chris :)

Charles Messina

January 6, 2022 at 3:31 AM

Great imagery! Love this, Susan. Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie

Susan Woodrow

January 7, 2022 at 8:28 AM

thanks Charlie...glad you liked it! A great 2022 to you :)

Michelle Faulkner

December 29, 2021 at 9:32 PM

Hi Susan, I really like the contrast of the wood and the river, also the harmony of roots holding still, very spiritual! Hoping this will be a winner for you~

Susan Woodrow

December 30, 2021 at 3:17 PM

thank you Michelle....happy New Year to you :)

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