Mohican

Hardwood floats on river ever flowing Deepest roots hold still 12/29/21: '60s Grand Banks 42 - Village West

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I Am Anaya

Date: 8/17/2022 5:28:00 PM

Boating, anchored on the Mohican River. My interpretation of an immersing haiku!

Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/17/2022 5:37:00 PM

Hi Anaya! I love knowing your interpretation -thank you :) the wooden boat’s name was Mohican and she was on the San Joaquin River :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/10/2022 4:24:00 AM

Very nice!

Susan Woodrow
Date: 2/15/2022 7:06:00 PM

thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/7/2022 10:11:00 AM

I love the thoughts this creates. Constant and timeless while never letting go. Beautifully crafted Susan.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/8/2022 2:40:00 PM

thank you, Chris :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/6/2022 3:31:00 AM

Great imagery! Love this, Susan. Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie

Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/7/2022 8:28:00 AM

thanks Charlie...glad you liked it! A great 2022 to you :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/29/2021 9:32:00 PM

Hi Susan, I really like the contrast of the wood and the river, also the harmony of roots holding still, very spiritual! Hoping this will be a winner for you~

Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/30/2021 3:17:00 PM

thank you Michelle....happy New Year to you :)