Mohabbat

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Soft whisper cuts through the silence. Priya's response into Prem's waiting ear... "I love you, too" His smiling soul dancing with unfettered abandon. "Mohabbat" is an Urdu word of Arabic origin. It translates to "love" in English. Submitted for... Bite Size Poem No15 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Date: 07/29/2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/2/2021 1:38:00 PM

Truly "love" dances with "unfettered abandon" in your bite size poem Edward. Love the three references to "love." Congratulations on your win!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/2/2021 3:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sam:-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2021 11:22:00 PM

I like this one, Edward, simple and lovely:) Priya, Prem, clever use of names meaning 'love' too, congratulations:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/2/2021 12:14:00 PM

Wow, that I didn't know! Thanks for the visit and congrats, Jo:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Four very special words "I love you, too" Everyone needs to it said. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)