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Modesty

A floral parasol gave shade to features sad, but finely drawn, no laugh lines marked her sweet facade, a countenance both pale and wan. She glided by the garden wall and shed a tear, a wistful sigh, the blossoms bent as if in awe, the warblers chirped in sympathy. I yearned to take her arm, to find the reason for her dire distress, but modesty prevailed. Consumed with unrequited love my passion full curtailed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/22/2012 8:17:00 PM
A time from the past begets the woman portrayed in this poem of elegance. A damsel in distress such as this we won't find today.
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:11:00 AM
Okay Keith, I see her in her beautiful brocade dress - pale fuscia I think, lonely for Victorian men who respect too much her modesty. love it and thank you for your thought comment on my poetry. Kathy
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