Modesty

A floral parasol gave shade
to features sad, but finely drawn,
no laugh lines marked her sweet facade,
a countenance both pale and wan.
She glided by the garden wall
and shed a tear, a wistful sigh,
the blossoms bent as if in awe,
the warblers chirped in sympathy.
I yearned to take her arm, to find
the reason for her dire distress,
but modesty prevailed.
Consumed with unrequited love
my passion full curtailed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 8:17 PM
A time from the past begets the woman portrayed in this poem of elegance. A damsel in distress such as this we won't find today.
Collins Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Okay Keith, I see her in her beautiful brocade dress - pale fuscia I think, lonely for Victorian men who respect too much her modesty. love it and thank you for your thought comment on my poetry. Kathy
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