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This is only the initial part of a long poem in italian language entitled Moderna Commedia, which I am going to translate in english.
It consists of 30 canti in terzine (like Dante's Divina Commedia) for a total of 2700 verses.
I started this poem almost for kidding and completed it in about one year in a sort of fever and deep emotional participation.
It is a dream and, as a dream (sogno), won the first prize of the contest "Alla mensa dei sogni". It was also selected among the first five finalists of the prize "Alessandro Manzoni" and the first four canti had the special prize of the jury of the contest "Il poeta e il narratore " at Monselice.
The paper and ebook of  "La Commedia illustrata" are available on the site ilmiolibro.it 
Dopo lunghe vicende della vita Mi ritrovai seduto su un divano Con un telecomando fra le dita. When my life struggles were to their end I found myself sitting on a sofa Holding a tv control in my hand. E girando i canali piano piano Cercavo storie prive di violenza Ma la ricerca continuava invano. Scanning the channels slowly one by one Was looking for non violent images But my research went on along in vain. Ovunque sangue e lutti in evidenza Riempivano il visore a me di fronte Mettendo a dura prova la pazienza. Mourning and blood appeared everywhere Filling the screen I saw in front of me Subjecting patience to a test too hard. Vedo oscillare e poi crollare un ponte Rotto dall’infuriar della Natura Che divide la terra a valle e a monte. I see a bridge fluctuating, breacking down Much hardly stricken by the nature fury The land dividing upstream downstream. Torri gemelle di elevate mura Colpite in cielo sono torce ardenti Vederle sbriciolate è cosa dura. Tall walls twin towers of a city pride In sky affected are only burning torches To see them crumbled is very hard indeed. Odio e violenza accecano le menti Di chi troppo subisce o troppo impera Colpendo a caso le civili genti. Violence and hate blind the human brains Of people subject or much commanding Hitting at random any civil being. Chi la storia rilegge sempre spera Che guerra e morte vengano bandite Ma la speranza umana mai si avvera. Reading the story one really hopes That war and death will be banned away But human hope never becomes real. Uomini, sveglia! E con forza agite Contro chi l’armi costruisce e vende E trae profitto distruggendo vite. Men be wake up! And strongly act Against who weaponry builds and sells And benefit gains from destroyed lifes. Del secolo passato le vicende Rivedo col ricordo e col pensiero Dolci momenti misti a cose orrende. Of the last century looking at the events I see by memory and by thought Sweet moments and horrendous things. Un piccol uomo col baffetto nero Urla alle folle l’odio contro il mondo Che vuole soggiogare nel suo impero. A little man with a black mustache Shouting to crowd his hate for world Which wants to subjugate in his empire. E prende corpo il suo progetto immondo Di sterminare un popolo reietto Che uccide in massa quasi fino in fondo. His dirty project takes soon shape To exterminate a rejected people Which kills in mass almost to the end. Uomo sanguigno, corpulento aspetto Da molto tempo prese già il potere Arringando le folle, gonfio il petto. Sanguineous man, of portly appearance Much time before took already power The crowds haranguing, with a swollen breast. Al nazista s’allea. Per suo volere Inique leggi contro l’altra “razza” Promulga tosto. Poi le fa valere. With the nazi an alliance forms And unfair laws against the other “race” Suddenly enacts and then applies. L’odio così anche in Italia impazza Colpendo senza senno i cittadini Con l’applauso e il consenso della piazza. So in Italy too hateful hatred rages Citizens hitting with no sense and reason With the applause and consent of the crowd. Per lo spazio vitale ed i suoi fini Il nazista scatena la gran guerra A nord del Belgio valica i confini To get more space reaching more power The nazist triggers the great war At north of Belgium crosses borders. Invadendo la Francia e la sua terra Fino a Parigi e al mare d’occidente Minacciando perfino l’Inghilterra. Invading France and its land Down to Paris and the western sea Threatening even the English shore. Il pavido alleato immantinente Partecipa alla guerra mal pensando Di unire le sue sorti col vincente. The fearful ally just at once Enters the war with the wrong illusion To join his future with the winning force. Tronfio di sé sfodera il suo brando E vilmente lo affonda nella Francia Vinta, battuta e ormai senza comando. Self smug and puffed he pulls his sword And cowardly he pierces France Won, demolished by then without a guide. Egli in tal modo il proprio carro aggancia A quello del bieco suo alleato Che adesso verso l’est la sfida lancia. He in this way his chariot hooks To the one of his awry ally Who now to east his challenge throws.

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Date: 3/16/2014 2:03:00 PM
Mario :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2014 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it, maro
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Mario De Paz
Date: 3/16/2014 7:19:00 AM
Thank you for appreciation and comment. I am visiting your poems
Date: 3/11/2014 10:16:00 AM
Mario, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/16/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Skat, I am happy to hear from you. I am now involved in a very hard task with a translation of Dante's masterpiece and I am answering late to your message
Date: 5/19/2013 12:32:00 AM
A sharp and poignant masterpeace. Exceptional look at civilations.
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Date: 3/16/2014 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for appreciation. It is always nuce to receive comments from you. Sorry I am late in answering, but these times I am so busy....
Date: 5/14/2013 2:43:00 PM
thanks mario, i appreciate the email... ~luv p.d.
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Date: 5/12/2013 4:25:00 PM
Mario, maybe you can separate the English part, and send it to me through e-mail. I would like to re-read the poems, and make a better judgement. here's my e-mail... in case you have the time... apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com Linda
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