Tammy Reams Poet Senryu

Models

Make-up we apply
                      Beautiful glass porcelain face
                              The glamorized doll.
                         
        Tammy Reams    Contest sponsored by: Judy Konos " Get your Senryu on"
                                  1st Place

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:09 PM Tammy, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA Tammy Reams April 18, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thank you Poet Destroyer. The first one I have ever written.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 15, 2015 at 7:56 PM Like the 2nd line Tammy.. :)!!! I see that it won first congratulations!!//olive eloisa Tammy Reams April 17, 2015 at 7:22 AM Thank you Olive for the sweet comment.

Sara Kendrick April 12, 2015 at 4:46 PM Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara Tammy Reams April 13, 2015 at 8:05 PM Thank you Sara for the nice comment.

Paul Callus April 12, 2015 at 11:06 AM Extra make-up is a put-off for many men; same applies to photo shopping! Congrats on your win, Tammy! // paul Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 11:29 AM Thank you Paul for the nice comment. I agree on the photo shopping. Air brushing is a big turn off.

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2015 at 10:18 PM Big congrats on your win here, dear! Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 11:05 AM Again thank you so much for the nice comment Andrea. Your one of my best fans.

Judy Konos April 11, 2015 at 5:22 PM Great perspective! Never thought about it this way....you are "Spot On"...thanks for being in my contest! Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 11:04 AM Thank you Judy for the nice comment. My first Senyru. Had to look it up to make sure I was doing it right. LOL

Jan Allison April 11, 2015 at 10:14 AM Dropping back with my congrats Tammy:-) Hugs jan xx Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 11:01 AM Thanks Jan for the nice comment. Hugs back to you

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2015 at 11:49 PM It's fun seeing what people choose their senryu about! I bet you must enjoy that fun show Top Model! Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 11:00 AM Thanks Andrea. I'm still looking for the miracle cream and haven't found it yet.

Constance La France April 10, 2015 at 7:19 PM Tammy, you captured false beauty well, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 10:55 AM Thank you for the very nice comment Broken Wing.

Jan Allison April 10, 2015 at 11:23 AM very clever Tammy:-) hugs jan xx Tammy Reams April 10, 2015 at 5:59 PM Thank you Jan! My first senryu.

Eileen Manassian April 10, 2015 at 9:14 AM Good one, Tammy. True. Make up does make a world of difference. Too much isn't good...I get the point of this senryu. Good luck in the contest. :) Tammy Reams April 10, 2015 at 6:00 PM Thank you Jade for the nice comment!