Model Behaviour

Catwalks
Crowd gawks

Wont style
Forced smile

Strike pose
Fake nose

Weird strut
Flat butt

Scant curves
Unnerves

Small-hipped
Lunch skipped

Stick-thin
Chagrin

Faux tan
Pecan

Plucked brow
Used plough?

Long lash
Bleached 'tache

Plump lips
Veiled nips

Waxed mound
Astound

Forebear
Despair

Sweet girls
Morph churls

Sly pout
Grim trout

Taut thighs
All lies

Make hot
Post-shot

Airbrushed
Not hushed

Mere gaud
Defraud

Model?
Twaddle!

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25 November 2017

For the "Footle Form - Sequenced or Stand-Alone" contest, sponsored by Brian Strand.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:36 PM
wowie. This is a REALLY great set of them, John!! You have a huge advantage over me with this string of clever footles.
Michaels Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Hi Andrea. Thanks for the kind comments - certainly didn't turn out that way, though!! All the best, John.
Lee Sr. Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Likable clever verse, loved it ---James
Michaels Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Thanks for your comments, James! Appreciated! Regards, John.
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Absolutely hilarious John you have mastered this form brilliantly:-) am adding it to my faves its so funny:-) hugs jan xx
Michaels Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Wow! That means so much coming from you, the master of the "funnies". Unfortunately, doesn't look like the sponsored shared my / your sense of humour. Oh, well... Many thanks for the kind and supportive comments! All the best, John.
Callus Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:09 AM
A clever and entertaining chain of footle, John. This should do well in the contest. Regards // paul
Michaels Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, Paul. Unfortunately wasn't meant to be, but appreciate the support. Kind regards, John.
Canerdy Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:31 AM
WOW! This is fantastic, John. I was only able to do three for mine. Janice
Michaels Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thanks very much, Janice! Considering the contest was originally a single string and now it's multiples, not sure if me having this many will be a plus or a minus!! I appreciate your comments! All the best, John.
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