Model!! Me?

Finally at my autumn age
I am going to be on stage

I have become a model
Will be featured in books

There will be a billboard
With my hair blowing

I will be dancing looking Ginger
With the great Fred Astair

What else can I say
About me today

I just can't wait
Hope that you stay

Look for me featured
With that special look

That company down the street
Wants me you see

I will do ads for Trim and Fit
Fitness center that says

Don't you think it's time
For Trim and Fit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/16/2009 11:35:00 AM
Another chuckler Sara >> koolio write >> James
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Date: 10/15/2009 4:43:00 PM
duh? what you talkin' 'bout?
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Date: 10/14/2009 7:17:00 PM
I enjoyed you beautiful rhyming poem Sara, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2009 6:59:00 PM
Sweet poem Sara! Enjoyed reading it today. Congratulations! ~Jen~
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:36:00 PM
nice poem
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:24:00 PM
funny poem :)
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Date: 10/14/2009 1:57:00 PM
This is cute Sara...You ask about my leg cramps..I think a lack of potassium..I'm eating more bananas and taking potassium tablets now. Thanks for asking...Enjoy all your works...Marty
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Date: 10/14/2009 1:48:00 PM
Wow, Sara! Congratulations! You should post a copy in your photos! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/14/2009 10:40:00 AM
LOL! Like the twist at the end. Fun story-line. Enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/14/2009 10:21:00 AM
I think I feel you. I wish that I was more 'trim and fit' sometimes. Entertaining write.
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Date: 10/14/2009 9:32:00 AM
Hey Sara, As usual, perfect rhyme and flow! Excellent job! And congratulations, my dear! Peace and love, audrey
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