Get Your Premium Membership

Mocking the Dead

Scintillating night shimmering between the stars darkness host flaunting loveliness concealing and exposes wield power encouraging serpentine walks to manifest themselves. The nascent scent of sandalwood flows, does it mock the dead. In the midst of midnight mystic twilight two lovebirds sing mid purple and mauve wisteria. Silence gently fades in an infinite cascade Warm fraternal embrace of a blazing moon Tension burst in darken moment made afraid. Epic heartbeat tsunami waves break away. We are filled with passion in beauty of poetry that is full of life. Do we stay alive because of it?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/1/2023 7:28:00 AM
Your poem shines brightly, captivating me with its brilliance. The way you skillfully employ alliteration, painting vivid pictures in my mind with your carefully chosen words, is nothing short of remarkable. Congratulations on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 1:24:00 PM
Back to say CONGRATS on a win Eve!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 12:54:00 PM
Love the question at the end! Congratulations, Eve!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 11:22:00 AM
The arrangement of words to describe the theme is very good here... I think its a no to your question at the end... Thank you for writing for my poem and congratulations on your placement..
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 12:53:00 AM
Your poem is brilliant. A wonderful take on a title that normally puts me off. Your alliteration, imagery and conclusion are absolutely the best. Hugs xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 9:24:00 AM
A unique perspective my friend. Nothing can mock the dead more than being alive.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 12:17:00 AM
This is unique and engaging. Love the purple wisteria. Good job and best wishes in the contest Eve.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things