Mocking the Dead

Mocking the dead, 
A man passed by kidjaga cemetery and 
saw some folks praying for the dead. 
He was so astonished and mocked
the living ones as they seemed
to be unintelligent in his eyes. 
"How do they pray for cadavers 
who cannot see and  listen? " 
He asked a woman who passed 
near by him, 
"they can hear us well, " 
She responded and
 laughed at him. 
"Do you really identify yourself sister?" 
He asked her, 
she continued to laugh nervously 
 and joined the people who prayed for the dead. 
He found it difficult to be au fait with their culture 
and thought to share more about spiritual
 teachings with them to take out that exaggerated stupidity. 
that woman spoke to her mother silently 
"the man who is seating on that stone
 under the guava tree was mocking the dead,
 by saying that they don't hear and see us. 
I could not confront him because I was precipitating  
to join prayers." 
"don't question our culture dearly, 
remember when Jesus said to let the dead burry themselves, " her mother said, 
and they continued doing their incantations peacefully. 
He walked down the valley,  
crossed the river 
and went home calmly.


....First place in Contest ....
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Interesting write. Congratulations!
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 4:20 PM
Thank you for comment and compliment You are welcome
One Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 11:09 AM
You write with a lot of passion and knowledge. Thank you for taking part in my contest Alfonso and congratulations on your placement.
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 4:21 PM
Thank you for placement and compliment. You are welcome
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 8:20 PM
MOCKING THE DEAD September 23/2023 Mocking the dead Poetry Contest
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Engaging and thought provoking.
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September 23, 2023 at 8:21 PM
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