Mocking Birds

O fair lark who first sang with
Much summery mirth
She casts her gaze upon 
Fresh pastures and dark waters
O sweet lark,
What see you in bright dawn light?

By day the mockingbird entertains
thoughts of freedom
Her throat holds caricatures of 
joyful songs
O mockingbird, 
Whose hymns do thy warble
In the noontide fair?


By the afternoon crows gather
to witness a murder
feast on the bones of their lovers
O thy villainous creatures
To whom do you confess your sins
in the milky twilight?

O beautiful philomel,
 O love, by night fall
her song falls on deaf ears
She cringes as the cold sets in
O fair philomel, where are you
in the dusty hallows of the eve?

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philomel - old poetic term for nightingale, from the myth of Philomela who is raped/abused. * Female nightingales do not sing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/25/2014 9:17:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment..PD
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Date: 5/24/2014 12:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/25/2014 12:35:00 AM
Thank you :D
Date: 5/23/2014 10:25:00 AM
A E RIVERBANK,, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/25/2014 12:37:00 AM
Thank you for the placement and hosting! Tis an honor to be on the list. :D
Date: 5/1/2014 7:00:00 AM
Great writing. I'm glad you told what philomel meant cuz I didn't know, but your words flow so well that even unknowing of the meaning I could feel the waves the words make.
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Date: 5/1/2014 1:16:00 AM
Enjoyed this lovely analogical write, A.E
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