Mocking Birds

O fair lark who first sang with
Much summery mirth
She casts her gaze upon 
Fresh pastures and dark waters
O sweet lark,
What see you in bright dawn light?

By day the mockingbird entertains
thoughts of freedom
Her throat holds caricatures of 
joyful songs
O mockingbird, 
Whose hymns do thy warble
In the noontide fair?


By the afternoon crows gather
to witness a murder
feast on the bones of their lovers
O thy villainous creatures
To whom do you confess your sins
in the milky twilight?

O beautiful philomel,
 O love, by night fall
her song falls on deaf ears
She cringes as the cold sets in
O fair philomel, where are you
in the dusty hallows of the eve?

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philomel - old poetic term for nightingale, from the myth of Philomela who is raped/abused. * Female nightingales do not sing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 9:17 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment..PD
Walker  Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 12:57 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs
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May 25, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Thank you :D
A   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:25 AM
A E RIVERBANK,, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
Rivenbark Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Thank you for the placement and hosting! Tis an honor to be on the list. :D
Nance Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 7:00 AM
Great writing. I'm glad you told what philomel meant cuz I didn't know, but your words flow so well that even unknowing of the meaning I could feel the waves the words make.
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:16 AM
Enjoyed this lovely analogical write, A.E
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