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Mocking Bird Sat

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           Mocking Bird sat
                           Ruffled tails bouncing...
                                          Cat stealthly approaching






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Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Lisa Lee Date: 2/15/2011 4:11:00 PM I love this one as well! Great and lovely images, Sara! Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 2/14/2011 2:20:00 PM This is superb, Sara. I love that you chose a 'mocking' bird as one of the main characters. Best wishes to you. Love, Deb Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 2/14/2011 5:22:00 AM Puts the reader right there, Sara. I like what Daver says. Is this out your kitchen window? :) We have 9 cats to watch out there. Birds constantly in jeopardy!not to fear though ...these felines would rather catch a can of friskies gourmet delight.... Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 2/14/2011 4:47:00 AM Don't think that the cat was quick enough to catch the birdie! Enjoyed your funny Haiku today, Sara! Thank you for your kind comments and have a great Valentine's day...Gert Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 2/13/2011 7:02:00 AM Ooo, naughty cat. Step away from the bird. Koolio Haiku Sara. Have a lovely Sunday....:) Login to Reply

James Tate Date: 2/13/2011 5:25:00 AM Sara, great scene here, filled with suspense. I love Robins. And cats to, in their place, but not this place. Thanks for your comments on Grandfather's Clock Revisited. I don't know how many will recall the old song that I referred to, glad you did. One more thing, can you tell me how to post a message on My Soup Mail? I can answer one received, but don't know how to initiate a new one. Thx. JT Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 2/13/2011 5:11:00 AM I can just see this happening. No doubt, the bird will fly away before the cat is able to pounce. Best to you, Diane Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/12/2011 11:12:00 AM Nice Haiku .But what happened ultimately--Sara?----:) Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 2/12/2011 10:37:00 AM Stamp your foot! Shout! Don't let that there cat get that there mocking bird. Great image. We feed birds in our back yard and I have hollered at cats more than once. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/12/2011 10:29:00 AM Sure hope the mockingbird gets away, Sara. When I had cats, they caught rabbits, mice and squirrels, but they never left a bird on my doorstep. Great image -- you created suspense! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 2/12/2011 9:18:00 AM sara kindrick sat, sipping her coffee. mountian lion stalking her Login to Reply