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Mocking Bird

Mocking bird sitting on a twig Filling his craw with those ripe figs Babies are grown flown from home All that responsiblity long gone, gone

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Adell Foster

Date: 10/6/2009 3:12:00 AM

Excellent writing, your imagery projects the empty nest in great rhythmic tone. I thank you for sharing the read. Many Blessings, Adell

Angel Jackson-Abner

Date: 10/4/2009 3:37:00 PM

I am so not looking foward for my baby to leave me so soon, lol... My baby just turned 2, but it is coming all so fast on me.

Thomas Stanton

Date: 10/2/2009 12:08:00 AM

a short poem for you because you do them so beautifully, and i struggle to... i had bought her two hand made crystal glasses one was red and one was blue the day our son left home his old thermos fell from the top shelf and broke the red glass we still have the blue glass and each other

James Peranteau

Date: 10/1/2009 6:16:00 AM

Wow ! This is such a cute but wise poem Sara ! I'm gonna read more ! This goes in mine favs ! james

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/30/2009 5:50:00 PM

nicely penned, mom, did you feel better today? I hope so:) did you get a chance to test drive the van?

Milton Toran

Date: 9/30/2009 3:47:00 PM

Short poetry, great imagery of nature! Sweet rhymes. I love short poetry! For some reason, short poetry seems to have a stronger connection to the reader. Perhaps it's the talent of the poet! Keep up the great work! Milt

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/30/2009 3:16:00 PM

Yo do love nature as I do, Sara, nice rhyme. Keep your blank paper filled. Gert

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/30/2009 3:15:00 PM

I can tap my foot to this one Sara... Very Nice Flow and Words Used ... Going to my Fav's, it just makes one feel good (smile) MoonBee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/30/2009 2:42:00 PM

Mocking bird sitting on a twig Filling his craw with a ripe fig All the babies grown flown from home Responsibility long gone. Keep writing! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2009 1:45:00 PM

Nice rhyme Sara>>James

John Freeman

Date: 9/30/2009 9:01:00 AM

Hi Sara, Very witty, and also life inspiring, the mocking bird taking her well deserved ease, after her contribution to life is done! Beautiful rhymes also, Smile, And your most gracious comment was well received.Love, Sincerely Moses

Daver Austin

Date: 9/30/2009 7:53:00 AM

This is mucho charming, Sara. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2009 6:23:00 AM

Ahhh, lovely image, Sara! As "babies" leave the nest, both families and birds can give more attention to their own needs. A delightful read! Love, carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 9/30/2009 5:16:00 AM

Good morning Sara! Love the feeling in the Rhyme. Mocking bird, young one flying the coop....Well done. Later hun, Love Light Truth Patricia